Is it just me, or does this read like a draft thrown together about ten minutes before deadline?
Seriously, that thing really might have benefited from a few more revisions and the helpful hand of a good editor. It even seemed to give the poor headline writer difficulty (unless that headline was *gulp* supplied). I don’t think this one was inspired by the Washington Post.
But perhaps my assessment is mistaken. Do feel free, as always, to enlighten in the forum if you disagree (or if you agree).
